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smurfy27
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Artist | Student | Literature
Australia
I am an aspiring writer and/ or poet. I live for love and I have my hope in the hearts of my best friends and boyfriend. They are the ones who saved me.
I am currently 19, and I love penguins, red pandas and creepy things.
Send me a note of your tumblr, I'll give it a looksee.
Give a llama, get a llama :3
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So, I received a DISTINCTION for my first creative writing submission!! Of course there were edits, but largely I believe I did quite well. Now I believe I wish to do three more poems and a short story for my second folio entry.
HERE --> smurfy27.deviantart.com/galler… will be my folio gallery. I will add my next four after they have been marked. 
I'm INCREDIBLY stoked to have received such a high mark. I honestly did not expect to do well at all. 
( hypermagical )
  • Mood: Happy
  • Listening to: EQG2 OST
  • Reading: The truth behind death at Columbine
  • Watching: Shingeki no Bahamut
  • Playing: GTA San Andreas
  • Drinking: Monster

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So, I received a DISTINCTION for my first creative writing submission!! Of course there were edits, but largely I believe I did quite well. Now I believe I wish to do three more poems and a short story for my second folio entry.
HERE --> smurfy27.deviantart.com/galler… will be my folio gallery. I will add my next four after they have been marked. 
I'm INCREDIBLY stoked to have received such a high mark. I honestly did not expect to do well at all. 
( hypermagical )
  • Mood: Happy
  • Listening to: EQG2 OST
  • Reading: The truth behind death at Columbine
  • Watching: Shingeki no Bahamut
  • Playing: GTA San Andreas
  • Drinking: Monster
My rabbit! My rabbit!
Why are you so very broken?
The fire that took my family
Has it taken my only companion?

The doctor cannot find my cure
I cannot find the past
Children taunt me in the street
I'm through the looking glass

My snow white host strays
Down streets of cobbled stone
The shadows closing in on me
Here, a face I know?

A caged bird, I'm in her grasp
She smiles maniacally
Features melting into horror
Exiled from a place where I am free

Ancient bones lay bare and bloody
My vale of tears, a meadow of grief
No longer the place where I am safe
Long gone is my dwelling of peace

A dash of blue, I dance from shadows
A flock of butterflies shield me
From ruinous forms of memories long gone
I destroy the foul monstrosity


A whistle howls, the ground does quake
My father always did love trains
Now he is gone, so what is wrong
My past, has it come back again?

My sweet dormouse, the rumpled hare
No longer friends of mine
My torture chamber, burned and pummelled
Am I destined to die?

In the end, over cups of tea
Adorned in cogs and wheels
My friends sit here so merrily
They know how true death feels...

'My friends, my friends! Come drink with me...'
There are many ways a man can die;
In your last moments
You will recall all the lives
That ever you have endured.

Do you remember now, old soul,
When you stepped into that bear trap
Your leg grew so putrid
They had to cut it off?
Too late for you, the blood had spread.

Perhaps the car incident
That great metal monster
Came so fast down the hill,
We were afraid you'd never wake up.
The second time, you didn't.

A myriad of ends
From which you will always return to me.

Last time, it was the spider,
Larger than anything you’d seen.
You struggled in the web for days
Before it came and finished you.
You always have feared spiders.

I have watched you fall many a time,
Your breath slowed and stopped.
But unlike so many others
You forever return to the living.
Orphic
Part Two Folio I
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Folded hands
Upon a quaint lap
Lace in her gown and her hair

Fingers work
Through ebony locks
Soft ruby, menacing teeth

Gaunt and drawn
Sunken eyes vacant
They stare rom pits of greyed ash

Curled white nails
Splintered, cracked, broken
Rake across her open wounds

One last breath
Whispered in anguish
The dame sits her last portrait

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